RE: RE: Looking for perfection ๐Ÿ–‹ [EN|ES] // Buscando la perfecciรณn
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RE: Looking for perfection ๐Ÿ–‹ [EN|ES] // Buscando la perfecciรณn

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How to raise a man in 5 days. ๐Ÿ˜

Lovely and magical story, despite the usual wrongly translated pronouns here and there. (Damn you Deepl! ๐Ÿ˜œ)

Loved it marbrym@marbrym, but I'd strongly advise against the "waking up" thing in stories as theinkwell@theinkwell mentioned. It can leave readers disappointed after delving into the created world.

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