RE: RE: Esperanza 🦋 [EN|ES] -The Ink Well Prompt #55 - Prompt: "LENS"
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RE: Esperanza 🦋 [EN|ES] -The Ink Well Prompt #55 - Prompt: "LENS"

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It was like I was watching the whole thing, not just reading. Very descriptive and it flows very nicely.
The cab driver was right. It wasn't just a calm after the storm for him, it seems the beginning of the spring after that storm. 🙂

As a side note because you'll ask me about it 😛, there was a pronoun issue towards the end

As she was about to board he looks at him

I enjoyed reading your story marbrym@marbrym. Nicely written!