Welcome to The Ink Well @konaqua, this was quite an interesting read. You have quite the imagination and creativity with both, the stories being inspired by the splinterlands cards, and the drawings.

As a newcomer, and to get acquainted. we would like to ask you to have a read at our community rules (can be found at the top of our community page).

Furthermore, we do have some very useful tips in our Catalog of Writing Tips to further improve your writing of stories.

Last but not least, for general help around the Hive blockchain, or if you have any questions you'd like to ask. @theterminal is the best place for that!

Feel free to join The Terminal Discord server, which can be done using this invite:
https://discord.gg/AC78YbvMjQ