RE: RE: The Story of the Barn Ghost
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RE: The Story of the Barn Ghost

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Okay, wow! Just wow jayna@jayna... Haha

You turned a classic of a grandpa telling his story on how he met grandma over and over again into an extraordinarily entertaining piece.

Evan's grandpa has such a golden spirit! More golden than the gold watch he keeps. ๐Ÿ˜

The building and consistency of the grandpa's character through the telling of his story, and the way he tackles curious Evan's questions was just brilliant.

If I start quoting from the story to comment on, I'd probably end up quoting the whole story. So I will not do it. Hahaha

It felt like I was there with them, especially with the perfectly timed events of the mother and father interactions. And certainly felt the suspense as much as Evan did listening to his grandfather's haunted barn story. ๐Ÿ˜…

I donโ€™t know what itโ€™s like to grow old, because all those memories of the past keep me young.โ€ He reached out for Evan to help him up from the couch.
This was simply wonderful!