Oh, what an evil witch of a mother he has. Glad he faced her and stood up for Mel. 🙂

Very nice and immaginative story, thank you for sharing!

Just a side note. It's great that you are sourcing your images, but may I suggest using the link to the website page of the image instead of the direct link of the image.

One of the points of sourcing is giving credit where it's due. And linking to the artist's page serves that purpose well. 😉

Thank you, and again, beautiful story!