RE: RE: Special Connection
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RE: Special Connection

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Lovely story, and nicely written. You developed the character and his emotions well, from his social withdrawal to his falling in love.

Then one faithful day
Just this bit I believe is wrong. You probably meant "One fateful day" instead. 🙂




Well done! And thank you for sharing it.

@yaziris: Lovely story, | Ecency