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It is painful when a family member does something similar to you.... Something very unexpected and maybe that's why we lower our defenses and trust too much. The reality is that money has no friends. I

Impressive story and well deserved fate for corrupt.... He reaped what he sowed. Would that this were made possible in some places in this world. It was a pleasure to read this story.

Thank you TheInkWell. This is my entry for this week:

Greetings friend. Thanks for the support.

My entry

Thanks @theinkwell, I'll keep in mind not to add the lines between paragraphs for the future.

Good evening @theinkwell Please could you do the AI check on writing in the original language. I know it's complicated to do the analysis of the whole story in an AI detection tool, because of the amount

It is difficult for someone to feel betrayed by someone they have considered part of their family for so long. Sometimes it is painful to see things change suddenly and in such a drastic way. I think that

Greetings. It is a very entertaining read. Controlling the merger of two (02) galaxies is something that would require a vastly higher level of technology as you put it and even then the risks would be

Greetings. It's a very nice story, with a happy ending. Según's character finally got the courage to talk to Amara, and everything went as he had planned.

My entry

Muy pero muy bueno... Y todo a la interpretación del lector. Saludos

Impresionante amigo. Excelentes líneas... Quedó muy bien y me gusto bastante leerlo. Saludos @josemalavem

Gracias @es-literatos por el apoyo recibido. Es muy apreciado 👍👍

Saludos @josemalavem. Efectivamente la historia publicada tiene una segunda parte o más bien la continuidad. La dividí en dos partes cuando note que el escrito era muy extenso. Nunca fue la intención hacerlo

Of course it is... Nice to greet you.

Gracias a todo el equipo que integra está Comunidad de Literatos. Para mí es un honor que mi publicación haya sido seleccionada. Muchas gracias

Gracias por el apoyo. Se siente bastante bien cuando el trabajo en el que has puesto esfuerzo es reconocido. Muy agradecido

Gracias por el apoyo @es-literatos. Muy agradecido

That one was left there as part of the suspense at the end.... I initially thought of an ending where Thomas will take the book, but then I thought this ending added more to the story. Thanks for the support.