You come across precisely like you want, you just missed knowledgeably😂

Well, my inner critic can be a loudmouth but indeed flow and storyline are key the rest is secondary still in the end it´s the full package that counts. I don't need to be unorthodox or innovative although I would like it.
But not feeling crippled for now, but I am definitely taking a better look although creating that sense of urgency to really draw the reader deeper in is pretty challenging I should read the how-to on that I guess