Hmmm... The attitude Joy displayed towards her workers and people around her was so barbaric. She couldn't accept to trust or take a time to listen to others falls. Now, this has cost her losing people with good values. .

Hmm, in this story, i learnt we should be able to control our anger and don't let our worries swallow us.

Make an edit at the ending of your story. You placed two "had" by mistake.