Good story. Am glad Senator Monica was safe and help was rendered to Adama. But brother, your story needs a lots of editing, especially with the story dialogue there wasn't quote("") in the right place and the story introduction was little bit confusing. Although, you have a good imagination and ideas in creating a good story. You need a guide and the community has pinned post that will help you in writing a beautiful piece @cool08. You can check them out bro.

Good story anyways. Keep writing bro👌✌✌❤