Beautiful story. The tires of family love seal not to end. Far or near they will never let you down.

I enjoyed how your story hovered around Africa average family. Udoka quest for a better future and training his only sister. Although they are some few grammatical errors that needs to be changed. Some are in your introduction.

The mum prayed for safe trip and also for God's favour upon his busines.

Nevertheless, i enjoyed your story.

Keep writing.