Good story.
The story telling is interesting. Story about a community that celebrates a big yam festival where people in the community shared their yam with others. I loved the fact they showed good hospitality to Mfon. Although, you story dialogue wasn't written well

Common! Boy, join us, Idorenyin called Mfon, he joined in dancing and after everything, food was served, Idorenyin gave his shared of yam to Mfon to return home with it, Mfon was very happy, he said, thank you, my good friend Idorenyin, he replied, you are welcome my bossom friend.

When, he arrived home, his mother, asked him, who gave you, six tuber's of yam, he replied the perfect umbrella blessed me with it, and cover my body from heavily rainfall.

"Common! Boy. Join us." Idorenyin called out to Mfon

"Thank you my good friend." Said Mfon

"You're welcome my bossom friend." Replied Idorenyin.

These are just little mistakes, which can be corrected without changing your story.

I enjoyed reading your post. Keep writing bro 💯😌