Hmmm, the taste for power as a human is uncontrollable. The first king should have obeyed the law and step down without any kills and chaos. Now he's known for bad things. Shame on him

You story build up is interesting, except for the introduction but i found my way into the story 😌.

Excellent written. Good too see you joined theinkwell contest. Success to you.

Have a great day 💯❤