@ubani1: Interesting story.

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Interesting story.

its better to have a broken relationship, than a broken marriage

🤔 i hope Tommy listen to his mother. Also they are some grammatical errors and sentence structure not well arranged.

Most of the dialogue were not in (""). leaving the reader confused

A voice came from behind you doesn't go this way if you want to solve a problem such as this.

I turned and it was my mum, problems like require res composure and deep thought alcohol are not the best.

Correct form

A voice came from behind.
"You doesn't go this way if you want to solve a problem such as this."

I turned and it was my mum, problems like require res composure and deep thought alcohol are not the best.

So my dear friend, i recommend Grammarly app as a writing tool.

I enjoyed reading your story💯❤

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