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RE: The Spiritual Attack

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Nice story, You built the storyline very well little gruesome moment. But what triggered Othere 's death? Was it fear of the unknown? Or scared to be in the dark?
Because you left the reader confused on what made Othere to died so sudden.

Keep it up bro👌💯

@ubani1: Nice story, You | Ecency