Welcome to the Inkwell, @xrayman,

The story is very good. It is entertaining and has a great message. When writers offer a translated story we ask that they also provide the original. When we use AI detectors, a translation often comes up with high AI marks because of the translation bot.

Please note that we welcome both fiction and creative nonfiction. The creative nonfiction would use the tools of a fiction story (ex: set the scene, character development, dialogue, etc.) but would be based on 'real' life. That is, at the core these stories will be based on a true event.

Here is some more information to help acquaint you with our community:

• Be sure to read The Ink Well community rules at the top of the community home page, and check out our FAQ about The Ink Well.

Here are some important resources:

• You can find some great articles on story writing in our catalog of storytelling tips.
• You can find information about what we are looking for in creative nonfiction stories in this post.
• Be sure to review The Ink Well's treasure trove of tips, reminders and guidelines.

And please be sure to engage in the community by reading and commenting on the work of other community members. We ask everyone who posts in The Ink Well to read and comment on at least two other stories for each one published.

Again, welcome!