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You create a wonderful mood in this story. We feel the mother's love. We know she has become accustomed to this habit, and yet she is still a little concerned. You cleverly let us know early on that this is not her husband. He is still out, we are informed.
The ending is very gentle and sweet:
Sweet Dreams cupcake, mum loves you.
A kiss to say goodnight now
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RE: SLEEPWALKING