Hello @stevewealth

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The story you offer today has many strengths. It has a well-developed arc. It begins with Victor dismissing the importance of a professor's lecture and it ends with his understanding that importance. You give your character motivation--he wants to help his father. And you give his personality depth by having him engage with Aisha. Your medical expertise helps to make the story interesting.

We do note a few minor errors. One is your use of the word hypocritical when you likely intended to write Hippocratic.

Thank you for sharing this story with us. We look forward to reading more from you.