Hello @sallybeth23,
Welcome to the Inkwell. We appreciate that you have commented on one story. We do ask that authors comment on two. The interaction between authors is an important part of supporting fellow writers.

You create a vivid scene in this creative nonfiction story, one that carries us to the place you describe.

Now that you're here, please have a look around and get to know our community. Here are a few tips for getting acquainted with The Ink Well:

Be sure to read The Ink Well community rules at the top of the community home page, and check out our FAQ about The Ink Well.We accept two kinds of short stories in The Ink Well: fictional stories and creative nonfiction stories.

You can find some great articles on story writing in our catalog of storytelling tips.You can find information about what we are looking for in creative nonfiction stories in this post. Be sure to review The Ink Well's treasure trove of tips, reminders and guidelines.

Again, welcome! We look forward to reading more of your writing.