It is wonderful that in saving Zara, Lila found her true strengths. This is certainly an encounter that neither of them will forget soon! It would have been wonderful if you had given Lila some backstory however, so the reader was more invested in her character.

The Ink Well has some great resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips. For example, we have tips on developing characters in your stories, and integrating action, dialog and narrative. These resources can help you learn how to include the important elements of fiction in your stories.

Also, please note that the level of curation in The Ink Well isn't just based on stories, it is also based on engagement. Additionally, tagging #inkwellprompt should be reserved for tales which fit into the current prompts. (Cards or Reunion for fiction) Thanks for sharing your story!