RE: RE: Ouroboros- From Beginning To End - Prompt #58
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RE: Ouroboros- From Beginning To End - Prompt #58

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You take a bold leap here into a different kind of story. We all recognize the allegory, but you give it new meaning. It is not Eve (Eva) who plucks the fruit, but Adam. And knowledge begins not with the eating of the fruit, but with the snake. Talking to the snake corrupts the innocence of the two. They do not see a difference between them, until the snake corrupts their vision. They do not know what naked is, until the snake introduces the idea.

In the end, Adam and Eva are in defiance of the snake.

"We shall always live together."

This is a sophisticated, skillful application of the prompt and a valid exercise in creating effective dialogue. Thank you for sharing this story with us and as always thank you for supporting other authors in the community.

@theinkwell: You take a bold | Ecency