This is a very richly told and elaborate fantasy story, @poemsofasickmind. You really ran with the prompt!

We have a bit of feedback for you. We always recommend that writers take a bit more time with their stories, and be sure to read through carefully before publishing, in order to find and fix errors. There are quite a few of them in this story, which makes it a bit challenging for the reader. An excellent resource that can help you is our article titled Help for the Grammatically Challenged, which provides important tips on how to use Google Docs to draft your stories. It will point out errors that need to be fixed, and you can fix them by clicking on them.

Good luck and keep writing!