Hello @orianabeam, and welcome (it seems this may be your first post in the Inkwell).

Your story is well constructed. You create an impossibly perfect character. This character has no flaws--except for the fact that she does not appreciate the gift of life. The story presents a challenge for Inkwell curators because the community does not welcome violence, and surely suicide is an act of violence against self. And yet, we allow for flexibility in curating. This is not graphic violence and it is not gratuitous violence. So this time, it gets a pass. Please be careful in the future about posting stories that feature violence.

We welcome more stories from you. Your perspective is original and interesting. Your mastery of the form is evident. Thank you for sharing this narrative with us. We hope you will read the stories of other authors in the community. We expect that support from our writers, because feedback is crucial to the growth of writing skills.

Again, welcome and, really original story concept.