Beautifully written piece. However, you need to watch your pronouns:

She gave me a name. I wasn't familiar with it. Nevertheless, I closed my eyes, as though I were trying to recall his father. She added some more information to help my recollection process. "Okay," I said, nodding as though I just remembered his dad.

Should read :

She gave me a name. I wasn't familiar with it. Nevertheless, I closed my eyes, as though I were trying to recall her father. She added some more information to help my recollection process. "Okay," I said, nodding as though I just remembered her dad.

If you are using a translator please add a note to tell us which one you’re using. Also, you should post the original in your language underneath the English version.

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