RE: RE: Heart attack? (ESP/ENG)
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RE: Heart attack? (ESP/ENG)

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Adam is certainly a nasty, disturbed character. Actually, pathological. Of course he won't get away with it. He is out of his mind and will continue to behave erratically.

It was hard to understand some parts of the story. For example, why a syphilis test by Cody if he does not have syphilis? Also, even though Cody doesn't ask questions, impersonating someone at a laboratory is a rather big deal. It is hard for the reader to believe anyone would do this, even an obliging person.

You have given us the outline of an obsessive personality with malevolent inclinations. We understand this character very well, and also know such people do exist.

Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community.