You have a good imagination, @mandate. You might try some of the suggestions we provide in our article, Help for the Grammatically Challenged. For example, if you use Google docs to draft your posts, it will show many of the errors and you can quickly fix them by clicking on them to accept the suggestion. It's a great way to improve the quality of your writing!

On another note, please be sure to read our community rules, which you can find at the top of our community home page. Note that we do not allow violence (like the beheading in your story). Additionally, we ask every writer who publishes in The Ink Well to read and comment on at least two other stories for each story published.

Thank you, and keep writing.