What can go wrong with magic? You show us here. Mica is certainly a silly girl. One can certainly not trust either Mica or Shelron. You work out the details nicely. The story has magic, mystery and romance. You blend them well.

We would like to give you a tip about verb usage, for the future. In one sentence you write, "I hanged out with him". I hung out with him would be correct. Hang is a funny word. It trips up a lot of people. Here is a little write-up from Grammarly about using hang, hanged or hung. This might help :)

Thank you for sharing this entertaining story with us, @lazythoughts. It is a nice read. We appreciate that you engage with other authors in the community.