This is a sweet love story. You have a nice conversational style, breezy. We like this character, because she seems a little bit shy and she certainly is polite. She is mortified that she has spoiled the young man's (Jimmy's) shirt. The romance seems to progress very quickly, but with people so young, that seems understandable.

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