Greetings, Hive account@humor0404! Thanks for writing this story for The ink Well. The story really shows how Gab solves his problems in a one-sided way.
As readers we would like to know what Gab's ruin consisted of and also how he solved the problem in just two weeks. Perhaps by developing the plot further we could have read a better story. Thanks for your presence in the community and for supporting the other writers.