Hi @hamez. Before we can curate your story, you must provide the missing image source fort the last image in the story.

Also, here are some tips for things you might want to fix.

In the following sentence, the word "phantom" should be "fathom." A phantom is a spirit. To "fathom" is to understand or perceive something.

Enoch has kept this revelation only to himself for more than two centuries, reason being that he cannot phantom any other being that can literally convey enough powers to defeat the great Gravarion.

And in the next sentence, "there" should be "dare." This is a common expression: "How dare you...?"

And how there you call me by my name, don't you have respect for elders?