hi @glorydee. How wonderful to recapture some of your own youth whilst celebrating the fun and games of the next generation. Please can you consider some light editing of your work for spelling errors and issues with grammar and punctuation, before publishing in The Ink Well. There were some unfortunate spelling issues such as intercourse for inter-house and some long run on sentences that required periods instead of commas. You also need to ensure that you are being consistent with your use of speech marks in dialogue, using them to open and close the dialogue. These refinements, provided they do not extend to use of AI editors to rephrase your work, will elevate your work to a new level.