Your story is an interesting and controversial theme. The great storyline and the details especially the one coordinating with the Meteorologist reports created a visual scene that was imaginable and added depth to your story.
M. Yang came across as a strong character, whose warnings of the meeting to be a total secret, should not be taken lightly.
Thank you for sharing this with us, and we look forward to seeing you engaging and commenting on the stories of other authors in the community:)