This is an interesting story @fantom22, however your punctuation becomes sparse in your final paragraphs. As the reader, we do not know what the scene looks like here, whereas we felt well oriented with your experience in the first half.

The situation becomes confusing. You have such wonderful details in the beginning of this story, and it leaves us wanting more! Utilizing Google Docs to draft your posts would truly help here as well, for example:

concentrated alcohol brought with the poured half of the alcohol into their glasses and left the on the table the rest alcohol here.

The syntax checker on Google Docs would advise you to edit this. We recognize that a lot of work goes into learning to write in another language, so we hope to offer our members resources to make this process easier. It would be fantastic to see you edit the ending here, so we can really appreciate the surprise of this moment.

Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.