This is a clever story, @fantom22. The foreshadowing indicated that Archer was going to fail under the weight of his ambition and lack of experience. So the ending was a surprise. Nicely done!

One tip for you: Be sure to put quotation marks in at the beginning and end of your quotes. Here you ended the quote before Archer's father was done speaking:

The father again explained to him and said, "My child, only rich men do this type of work, who are resourceful enough to repay the loan."
And if those rich people are unable to repay the loan, then to help them their friends and acquaintances are also rich.

They already have all the comforts and facilities. If for some reason there is a shortfall in your project and you are unable to repay the bank loan, then you do not know how fatal its consequences can be, today you cannot even imagine. That's why I suggest that you think well before starting this work or understand its nuances by working in a similar factory for the first few months so that when you set up your factory, all those experiences will be useful to you. Don't be in a hurry before starting any work, it is very important to have experience of it apart from having complete knowledge of it.

Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members.