RE: RE: Unfortunate Love
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RE: Unfortunate Love

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You have worked out the narrative arc for the story rather well, fantom22@fantom22. While the happy ending may seem a bit unrealistic, still you provide all the reasons why it makes sense. It's nice to have a happy ending sometimes. The character development is good, also.

Thank you for sharing this narrative with us, fantom22@fantom22

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