It's fun to read a story that has such a clever twist. This is novel: a hungry burglar leaves a thumbprint on foil, after he raids the refrigerator. We get the image of this crook unknowingly setting a trap for himself by stopping to eat food!

Nice interpretation of foil. Also good description of scenes.

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