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A very clever use of the prompt. You truly spin a tale of great adventure and intrigue. Even the fake name of the spy, Wenchow Thapa, is exotic. The different pieces of this complicated plot fit together nicely. The story is fast-paced and entertaining. We would really like it if the interrogation did not include 'a lot of beating', but that's up to you. You could as easily and effectively have explained that the interrogation was rough :)
Your description of Sofi the spy is wonderful.
Thank you for sharing this plot-driven story with us, @fantom22. We see that you engage meaningfully with other authors in the community. We appreciate this very much. Thank you!
RE: Secrete mission --- Ink Well Prompt #83 -chatterbox (chatter, box and chatterbox)