You have a tender heart, @fantom22. You are moved by the fate of the dog Tommy. We are moved because of your effective language. There is a slight issue with the language that describes Tommy's end. We don't allow violence against animals or children, but in this case the story is so sensitive it would be alright if you perhaps made the scene less graphic. Maybe say something like a truck came put an end to his life or something like that. In the future, try to stay away from children and dogs who are killed.

This story was very well told. You handle the prompt well and the skill challenge. We appreciate that you are such an active member of the community. Thank you.