Hello @fantom22
It is a fact of life that there is violence all around us. However, in the Inkwell we try to focus on other themes. Your story is fast-paced and well plotted. However it revolves around and describes, quite graphically, violence.

Please understand that this story must be edited quickly if it is to meet the standards of the Inkwell community rule. It cannot be curated as it stands.

Thank you.