Your story slightly missed the mark as a response to the triple prompt in that you omitted to use the word box. That aside, your writing told an interesting story but could benefit from using an editor to review grammar for errors. Doing this could make a significant difference to your writing.

The Help for the Grammatically Challenged article provides important tips on how to use Google Docs to draft your stories. It will point out errors that need to be fixed, and you can fix them by clicking on them.

These resources can help you continually improve the quality of your stories.

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