I’m glad that Chike did well in the end.
If you want to do well in this community, it’s more than possible. However, you need to listen to advice - use Google Docs to write your stories, check your stories using resources such as grammarchecker (an online resource). Look through @jayna ‘s wonderful resources, you’ll find lots of helpful tips.
I’m wishing you luck in your journey, but you must try and study the resources on offer and use tools to improve.