RE: RE: THE MISSING PIECE
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RE: THE MISSING PIECE

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This story has a Solomon-like tone. The father has set a test that is not punitive. The test will will show the weakness of his children, if that weakness exists. The father wishes to help the children mature in a way that will help to insure a more secure future for them. His test seems sound. You draw the father's character well and give a satisfying arc to the story. You incorporate the prompt into the narrative.

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