We are sorry to hear that you had to go through so much to access your funds! Although it is a small balm, at least now you have a better way for next time. This is certainly a detailed account of a day that would leave anyone feeling upset, however we would have liked to see you incorporate some creative elements into your tale as well. For example: what did you see as you walked, was there any particular scent in the air?

Filling in the details of real events with the elements of fiction is what creative non-fiction is all about! We hope you will consider this in future tales, and perhaps check out the article linked above.

We will need you to link to the source of the image used in your Canva collage before we can curate this piece. Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.