Your story is like an interesting puzzle, @edystringz, with pieces falling into place throughout. It's very compelling and a good read!

As @itsostylish mentioned, there are some odd details and logistics in the story. It seems like she has amnesia when the man (who we later learn must be her husband) stands crying by her bedside. Does she remember him? Then he just seems to disappear when she realizes someone else — the doctor — is also in the room. A possible edit for your story would be to have him say goodbye when the doctor steps forward, or something like that. Hopefully that's helpful feedback!

That said, your writing is terrific. You do a nice job of spinning a tale and spiking it with interesting details! Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for engaging with other community members by reading and commenting on their stories.