What a fantastical story of salvation and a fortuitous future! Dan is unbelievably lucky to come away with his dreams in hand, and the wellness of his father. However, it would be nice to see a stronger story arc here, as well as additional character development for Angela. The article action, dialog and narrative is nicely paired with the other two, exemplifying the qualities of a well-rounded plot.

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