Well, you certainly took that prompt and ran with it. Your imagination is as lively as Queen's, but, unlike Queen, you do no harm. You entertain, which is good. There is obviously a moral to the story. She is warned not to go forward yet, but her pride (arrogance) leads her to go forward anyway. The results are disastrous.

One great thing about your story is, you don't preach the moral to us. You (the author) do not intrude into the story. You allow the characters and the action to show the moral. Good use of the prompt and good interpretation of the skill challenge.

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