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This is a good beginning of a story. It's as though you stopped after getting an idea and then just decided not to finish. A story has an arc: a beginning, a middle and an end. Here you have a conflict introduced, but no follow-up action, and no resolution. Think about that when you write. There is an introduction, a conflict and then resolution of the conflict. Also, we need some character development.
Here is a writing tip from @jayna about creating a story arc.
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