It is a sad fact of life that we don't always see the good that is right in front of us. It is fortunate that when it mattered, Daniel was aware enough to appreciate Bella for who she was and to recognise and admit his feelings for her. In writing it is important to convey as much of your story as possible using a show don't tell approach. You can find out more about this in the following Ink Well resource.

Show don't tell

Employing this approach will elevate your writing.

Additionally, using an editor like google docs will help to identify grammatical errors and spelling mistakes.

Help for the grammatically challenged

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