The heart of this story is the clever twist: the jealous woman is tricked into cleaning the house of her neighbor. The moral at the end of your story is satisfying:

people should be contented with whatever they have and not poke nose in people's family and businesses

You have created characters we admire, and characters we do not admire. The contrast between the two women, and families, adds interest to your narrative.

There is some roughness in style you might work on to improve readability. The material would shine if you could manage that.

Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community.