Your story has a great setting and lots of interesting, imaginative details. However, we would’ve liked to know more about the secret the friends discovered—without this information the story feels underdeveloped.

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The Ink Well has some great resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips. For example, we have tips on developing characters in your stories, and integrating action, dialog and narrative. These resources can help you learn how to include the important elements of fiction in your stories.